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#1 by Mrs Golightly on November 15, 2011 - 9:17 pm
The ostriches and elephants sound very real! You obviously take pride in your work and I am pleased to hear that you know what you need to do to make your writing even better! Keep up the good work!
#2 by BobToms (@BobToms100) on November 15, 2011 - 9:19 pm
Excellent work Lucy and Kira. Imagination, description and unexpected surprises in your accounts! I like how you want to improve them even more. It’s good to keep on improving a piece of work, like your stories, and do you think that we should always try to improve our stories or stop and be satisfied at some point in time?
#3 by Pablo Demarchi on November 16, 2011 - 12:08 am
Great work, Kira and Lucy. I think your writing is very good! I also think is good you want to improve it… Everything can be done a little better, so everyone should try to improve his/her work all the time!
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#1 by Mrs Golightly on November 15, 2011 - 9:17 pm
The ostriches and elephants sound very real! You obviously take pride in your work and I am pleased to hear that you know what you need to do to make your writing even better! Keep up the good work!
#2 by BobToms (@BobToms100) on November 15, 2011 - 9:19 pm
Excellent work Lucy and Kira. Imagination, description and unexpected surprises in your accounts! I like how you want to improve them even more. It’s good to keep on improving a piece of work, like your stories, and do you think that we should always try to improve our stories or stop and be satisfied at some point in time?
#3 by Pablo Demarchi on November 16, 2011 - 12:08 am
Great work, Kira and Lucy. I think your writing is very good! I also think is good you want to improve it… Everything can be done a little better, so everyone should try to improve his/her work all the time!
Pablo Demarchi
Argentina